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:iconyaen:

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Yaeh I suck and I take forever to get anything done. Working on a new page now, got this one kinda shaded and prepped. Problem with being an amateur is you never quite hit the technical quality you aim for!
bleeeehhhhh!!

Okay, an update!
So this is just an early draft of a page I'm working on. I'm working this style of using a more transparent panel layout. Moving from an open background to a boxed figure of the woman to the girl in front without a box and then using the ledge cut off to box in the imagination bits below. I think it flows well so far and keeps the page somewhat interesting to look at. We’ll see how the page changes with more definition and shading.
Yeah, this page makes no sense out of context, monstrous veggies haha.

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:icongrampagen:
Let's go down to the lobby, and get ourselves some...

ORGANIC VEGETABLES! BRAAAAUUURGH!!!!
:shocked:
:iconjoshikosei:
fur fags've got nothing on veg fags... wait, i just made myself sick.
:icongrampagen:
mmm, tater-tots...
:iconmegazinger:
instead of making innuendos, I will give more practical peer constructive criticism!! yeah!!

the foreground figure and veggies are nice, but...

girl's posture makes it so it looks like she is trying to fuse her legs into the wall

the older lady may be unimportant, but also deserves bones and muscles

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"A cartoonist is someone who has to draw the same thing every day and not repeat himself."

~ Charles M. Schultz
:iconyaen:
Yeah, when I was doing that crouching pose i was like ughh it's small enough to get away with? shoulda looked for better reference or just did something else. I'll fix it.
The woman behind was a rush job, I just wanted to swing in some lines and end it, i might just end up putting text bubbles here and there to cover up the rush job for now, should fix it though ahha.
:icontwentycent77:
GOOD JOB! I like how you place the shadows ! You have a good level ! Your image is like a professional ;p

i made a manga too on my profile x)

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Adresse de mon manga : [link]
:iconyaen:
Thanks for the comments. I tried reading your comic but there seems to be a problem with the site
:icontwentycent77:
no problem i like your art ;)

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Adresse de mon manga : [link]

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